Educational purposes: will modify the wrong sentences, have some common types of wrong
sentences; can point out problems in the sentence, and correct. Use symbols correctly
modify the sentence to modify.
teaching heavy, and difficult: to find the cause, do not change the intent, while
changes in the most concise way.
prepare teaching aids: slides.
teaching process:
First, review the import
we are speaking and writing, they often will be some faulty sentences. These sentences
mainly in the link between the words to defects, which we called the sentence In order
to express oneself accurately, clearly articulated, we must learn to modify the wrong
sentences. This lesson we have to review the changes wrong sentences.
Second, review the changes wrong sentences
(a), and learn new things
1, memory type
ask someone to recall that we used to meet What are the types of wrong sentences? Who
is going to talk about.
component defects, with inappropriate misnomer, word order reversed, and repeated long
-winded, refer to the unknown, contradictory, are not sensible.
2,UGG boots cheap, modify the wrong sentences to modify the steps
wrong sentences, as a doctor with a patient, to pinpoint the cause, the right remedy,
modify the wrong sentences, generally can be divided into four steps:
Reading : silent reading of the original sentence, understand the original meaning of
the sentence.
find: identify the cause.
change: for the wrong sentences of different But when the right medicine to change,
change to less, not embellished, to maintain the original intent.
check: check sentence grammar, logic is correct, check whether the sentence remain
intent.
3, Summary.
modify the wrong sentences in the important and difficult is to find the cause. It does
not change the intent of the principle is the same time, changes in the most simple
way.
4, type of practice:
⑴ see teachers who work hard day and night, so I was deeply education.
⑵ Yongchun spring is exceptionally beautiful place.
⑶ our patriotic enthusiasm for him deeply moved.
⑷ I am very interested in this book.
⑸ he was wrong a wrong thing.
⑹ visited chemical plants and paper mills, the people said:
⑻ everyone's eyes are on the podium.
5, students and teachers commented.
(b) the consolidation exercise
1, determine the question: Which of the following wrong sentences to change the most
accurate method, in brackets, playing
⑴ wrong sentences: Wing Chun's attractions are many Niumulin is the only one.
① Yongchun many places of interest, Niumulin is the most beautiful one. ... ... ...
... ()
② Yongchun few places of interest, is one of Niumulin one. ... ... ... ... ()
③ Yongchun few places of interest, is one of Niumulin one. ... ... ... ... ()
④ Yongchun many places of interest, is the only Niumulin. ... ... ... ... ... ... ()
⑵ wrong sentences: Dongzhang Reservoir rippling face.
① Dongzhang my face rippling reservoir. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ()
② Dongzhang face blue waves of the reservoir, and I sing. ... ... ... ()
③ rippling How beautiful Dongzhang Reservoir ah! ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
()
④ I face the stormy Dongzhang Reservoir. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ()
2, read the sentence,UGG boots clearance, there is the wrong fight
⑴ tell you health, our health and disease have security. ()
⑵ whatever the difficulties, he also has a solution. ()
⑶ covered in the little white cat, and no one Soke. ()
⑷ China and launch a satellite to hear the news, glad to have jumped up. ()
⑸ no sun, no our lovely world. ()
⑹ solar light,Bailey UGG boots, to heat, is a big fireball. ()
(C) improve the training
1, Exercises:
⑴ summer nights, often lying in the yard looking at the stars.
⑵ the help of the teacher, and finally correct the learning habits.
⑶ English very interested in me, and I particularly like.
⑷ Xiao Ming and Xiao-Mao visited the factories, he was a great education.
⑸ scraping the night wind and rain yesterday evening.
⑹ my home from Fujian province.
⑺ I can not help could not help out a tear.
⑻ I have to improve a bad bad habit.
⑼ teacher knowledge of today I basically talk about all understand.
⑽ garden, the colorful red flowers competing open.
⑾ Ming childhood love of learning, the formation of the brains.
⑿
⒀ zhao sacrifice their lives, will never yield to the Communist Party.
⒁ Despite the bad weather, always on time to school.
2, students commented.
3, Zhiyiwennan:
We have reviewed the various types of wrong sentences, the students there are other
places do not understand or do not understand, please come to talk about.
(d) comprehensive training.
⑴, modified by learned symbols, modify the following paragraph.
a spring Sunday, my parents took me to spring tour Huangpu Park. A constant stream of
visitors to the park. With different kinds of red flowers are open, and a string of
red, rose, bloom like flowers ... ... red fire, white as snow. Bees, butterflies
dancing in the flowers. See this vibrant scene, could not help saying: everywhere,
outside the White Bridge on the train to come, busy ... ... all of this, really makes
people distraught.
① review modification method: Ⅰ, to read and to express the meaning of the original.
Ⅱ, modify inappropriate words, words. Ⅲ, modify the grammar, logic, I'm on the wrong
sentence. Ⅳ, modify the discourse on the wrong punctuation.
② try to modify the
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④ exchange
⑵ need to modify the place to find and correct in situ .
One day, the weather was very hot. We visited the Park course, late is not her child to
kindergarten ... ... clearly. Children themselves run home,UGGs, little face red with
cold. This matter was moved to tears, I only turn in the eye socket.
three summary.
this lesson we review how to modify the wrong sentences. Modify the wrong sentences
before the sentence to read, to express clearly the meaning of the sentence. Then the
faulty syntax or logic errors on the part of the changes. Changes even after careful
examination, because some words wrong sentences have more than one disease, there will
depend on the meaning clear. Some wrong sentences more than one modification method, as
long as you can clearly expressed. It is noteworthy that the change wrong sentences, do
not change the original intent of the sentenc
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